Ch1 Page 7

Page 7 update.

I tweaked something pretty small with my update today. I'm going to include the full page on social media. It feels a little bit like a counter intuitive thing when I have website. hosting the comic in more fullness but I think the obvious thing is most people won't take the time to go back and check it out when they're at a computer. Ah well I suppose. Making it more available is good. And I think its still important to have somewhere for someone discover and catch up easily on everything. 

Anyways, about the page! This one was a bit of a tricky page if I'm remembering right. I couldn't settle on how panel 4 should look. I eventually landed on a fallen crystal in the foreground as Kay is running home. I realized it was a good detail for the audience to understand. Unfortunately its a little muddled because of the toning and size perhaps? The last panel in the page is my favourite. From the first pencil sketch I thought I captured a good expression for Kay.

Until next week! If you have a preference reading - I'd love to hear from you! And let me know if the fallen crystal was clear to you!

Jon

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